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YELLOW JACKET
Once upon a time, five years ago,
On Facebook, a guy caught my eye, you know.
In a coat with a rose, he looked so fine,
I fell for him in three seconds' time.
Kind and cute, he seemed to be,
His love for family, clear to see.
I wished he felt the same for me,
But we stayed friends, just texting, you see.
He never saw me as his wife,
But in my head, I lived that life.
Now five years on, he's still the same,
In his yellow jacket, my heart's aflame.
Though he doesn't notice, doesn't care,
My love for him, it's always there.
From first sight to his touch so rare,
Yellow jacket and good hair, I wished you care, I wished you care.
You will find me where the grasses are greener - pourel.
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Udeeta Borpujari on 13 Feb 2024
Beautiful!