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- 08 Apr 2024
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I just want to live until I can't anymore! ........
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Reverie on 13 Apr 2024
I loved the message you were trying to convey. But to me it feels like, the message could have been said in a more beautiful and descriptive way. But your language is very good. So there's room for improvement. I loved it.
Infinite Optimism on 15 Apr 2024
Thanks Reverie for the appreciation! I am delighted you liked the story! Your suggestions are important to me, I have noted and will definitely improve. It will reflect in my next story. Keep reading and motivating!!????